I'm going out on a limb (my left arm, to be specific) by publishing this. I've never done this before. Here we go!
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Static
The headphones cling
like shining leeches
to his sweat-slicked ears.
The static hisses--
heavy,
faithful
--and he sulks
beneath his black
noisemaker god.
There is a glare in his
monster-green eyes and the
hisssssssss
is creeping over his tongue.
He jumps
at a
pause
in the music and
with a
snap
breaks his own
stiffened neck.
6 comments:
... *snap* *snap*
very nice.
I used to write poetry a lot too.:) This makes me smile. :)
i still write poetry....only in black pen....and wear a lot of black shirts....oh.
is it just me or is it not sad that his neck breaks? or maybe I'm just to literal and can't understand the deeper/finer meanings of poetry... :)
Derek: Thank you.
Briana: Thank you. I didn't know you wrote poetry!
Mackenzi: Confession: I still only write in black pen, and I still wear black shirts all the time. :)
David: Interesting observation.... ;)
I love poetry. All poetry. Yes. ps-I found a book of literature from Midvale of Briana's and a couple poems are yours. They are great. That's all.
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